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Heat Sun by LilithDarck

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Vision: It is really nice! I like the simplicity of it. It is really pleasing to the eye. I like the short little cactus...it's so cute!!!

Originality: This is the first vector I've seen of a desert, but lots of people do deserts. I think it was overall original, but again, lots of people do deserts to protray heat.

Technique: this is really good technique wise. The sky is a bit too similar to the desert dunes though. Maybe make the sky a bit more orangy? I really like the gradients on the sand dunes also. They make it look nice.

Impact: Impact was good. I defiantly could feel the heat :)


Overall...great job!
The Artist thought this was FAIR
3 out of 3 deviants thought this was fair.

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LilithDarck Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Professional General Artist
Thank you so much for the such pleasant words about my work!!! I am glad you like it ^^
Thanks for your objective opinion.
The fair criticism and good advice are very important for growth of the artist.
I really appreciate it.^^`
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naladraws Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks. At least you appreciate constructive critisim....
read this: [link]

that was helpful, no? They rejected it as useless just because I didn't praise their work.
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LilithDarck Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Professional General Artist
I think that adequate opinion and really good advice.
It often happens. Probably matter in age.
It is necessary will learn to criticize itself, for the correct react from another's criticism on the works.
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naladraws Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
hmm...quite immature for a thirteen year old even. unless this person is younger. :shifty:
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LilithDarck Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Professional General Artist
I think this person really simply more younger.:nod:
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